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Thursday, 13 November 2014

passion learning


Hi my name is Keanu and we are doing our passion learning. Why we done this is because we haven't done anything to put on our blog. What we did is that we done this so we know how munch we done well in our team. What we should do better next time is work better in  a group but I think we done a little bit well. What we were doing is this we had to colour one of the box the smiley faces were if you were done it all the time, and the maybe faces are if you sort of done it, and the sad face is if you were mucking around.

Wednesday, 29 October 2014

beach


W.A.L.T put lots of detail in our story

what we did is explain what we did in summer we done this because our class chose to and what I think I done well was that I did a very good job with my writing. What I think I should do better next time is make it a bit more interesting.

That was summer



when you went to the beach
and you ran across the hot burning rocks and sand.

And you bombed in the water and made a big splash.

And you squeezed your hands in the nice warm sand.

And you could smelled all the sweet fresh air.

And you saw all your friends running in excitement

Remember that time when you see the sprinkles and sparkles on the salt water.

Remember how the seagulls were so annoying when they were squawking?
That was summer.


Wednesday, 15 October 2014

kawakawa pools

W.A.L.T put lots of detail in our writting
for a start what I done well I put lots of describing words and detail. What think I should do next time is make my writing. What we were doing was we were writing about the holidays. We done this because we thought everyone would like to hear about it. 

so I hope you enjoy


In the holidays we went to the Kawakawa pools. Lots of huge people were there I was terrified.So my cousin said “Oh look all the Kaikohe hori’s are here” then I said “ where from Kaikohe so you got rejected? Then my idiotic brother drowned me but of course he didn't he didn't even notice or recognize that he was drowning himself really. Soon and slow as he could do it, he pulled my togs down. It was so embarrassing so I dived under the deep side of the pool as deep as I could and fast as I could. And grabbed them then grabbed on the side of the pool I forgot that I was holding my togs. Suddenly someone dived under me......

Friday, 29 August 2014

passion weeks

This week Room 17 has started to do a passion learning project. My group is Hine and Coby I think our group was going very well, what I think we should do better is co-roperate not just bossing them around. What I think I'm looking foward to is making some smoothies and baking and that's what my group is doing. Here is my groups plan I hope you like it.

 

Thursday, 21 August 2014

conjuctions


WALT use varied sentence beginnings and length

What we were doing is trying to use conjunctions properly. What I think I done well is that I used conjunctions properly like and. What I think I could do better next time is that I should put more conjunctions in there instead of just and.


Broken rusty stair’s were in the old creaky house. Long rusty wood with sharp pointed nails hanging off them. Doors were whacked down, brown mysterious cupboards behind creepy walk ways. Scared people given up trying to clean it, windows were smashed and covered with mist. Dead poisoned rats hanging from the cupboards, holes were in weak walls.
tables and chairs were smashed down, daddy long legs were making humongous webs white tails were as big as your hand.

Friday, 8 August 2014

scary story

W.A.L.T Show don't tell

what we done was a narrative story we were trying to is describe the forest what I done write is that I described what the monsters look like what I could of done is describe more of the forest not the monsters
we done this because it helped us write a narrative.



He was walking he suddenly turned around and saw body’s hanging from the trees, spirits flying around crying. he saw Skulls on the floor on the sharp leafs, then seen blood falling from the trees, he had a look in a cave it was full of dead animals with no skin and bite marks. Alive skeletons  walking around, devils killing people and hanging them and tying them up then something touched him on his shoulder…

once upon a time



we done this a few weeks ago with Whaea Ariana, it helped us a lot with how to structure our narrative, something I done well is that I described the forest, something I could do better next time is put more describing words in their. we were writing a narrative.


Once upon a time a girl named christy went in the magical sparkly forest at a sunny happy time the forest was filled with humongous trees that had 14 apples on them, bushes covered with blue berries some had spike’s sharp spike’s so people can't touch them. Christy had blue eyes; short blond hair and she had light skin. She went deeper into the forest and saw an apple on a bush it looked hard and green she ate it; her face went bubbly and she turned into a green ugly witch with a pointy nose. She walked by the cliff it was a long fall if you were to fall down, it would take 100 years, is her guess. So christy dashed all the way down the hill and came to the beach down by the beach, there were people relaxing, they were almost sunburned and they were all red. They all turned and said ‘WITCH AHHHHHHHH’ in a terrible fright and all ran away. She then went by the water and started splashing and saying ‘I hate being a witch’ in a ugly cranky voice. But something changed, her voice and so did her hands she said ‘that’s weird I'm sure my hands were green’ in a nice smooth voice. She then went for a dive and stayed under there for five or fifteen minutes. Back at home her mum was calling ‘christy where are you it’s lunch time, pancake's christy’ but christy didn't come she was still swimming so she could break the curse. By the time she came out of the sparkly water she turned back, she sprinted home and hugged mum THE END.

Friday, 13 June 2014

cant wait

‘Emmmmmm the bread smells so fresh and tasty my mouth was watery and I just wanted to gobble it up’ I was thinking to myself. ‘EW YUK what is that YUK smell’ I shouted when I looked at the thin and slimy wet smelly fish. Yummy I saw the yum tasty dry jam I tried to get some but there was whole bunch of people in the line I couldn't even get through then I waited forever and ever then finally I was at the front of the line and I brought some jam when I got there I said ‘yippee’? “yummmmm what's that smell I said cheese yum’’ I said to myself so I went and brought me some. After that we had a picnic it was tasty. Then we packed our stuff and went home. It the coolest night ever.    
                    By Keanu

blue card


In class I got the blue card from my teacher whooooo hoooooo I was thinking to myself. I got the blue card at 3 o'clock It was fantastic I got the blue card because I Achieved something that was fantastic. Then I went to go and get a treat in the office where the principal and mrs smith and mrs bates is. mrs smith said “choose something out of the basket”. After that I chose something out of the basket it had loads of stuff in it like lolys and loly necklaces and toy guns it was awesome but it was a little bit hard choosing something but it was the bestes day ever.But then I chose something out of the box it was a lolly necklace I felt proud.

Friday, 30 May 2014

Room 17 Assembly

Rm17's Assembly

When I went on stage I felt amazed and nervous because we were looking at the whole school. We had karakia mihi , Maurice said the karakia then janita introduced the girls liona waimarama mihi and journey they were doing this Awesome dance. After that janita and toa introduced the bongo people that were janita toa ezekiel mitchell leresah-joe and maurise they were Awesome. then we asked our princible if she was able to say any panui then we asked other teachers if they had any panui then we had karakia again.

                                                    The End.

                              



Friday, 16 May 2014

Keanu
is nice friendly  and clever
son of lynette
loves bubbles monkey bars and slides
sometimes feels happy surprised and scared
and afraid of moray eels great white sharks and  skulls
have always wanted to experience seeing a  Blue Whale in the deep, and being a dog
and kaikohe is is my home town
I think tuatara is the beast in the world

Friday, 9 May 2014

Kerikeri Pools

WALT     recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we felt.


On wednesday we went to the kerikeri pools with my mum and my brother and cousin. I dashed through  the doors and dived in the pool. It was so deep that I’d had to tippy toe. I was diving and doing cannonballs. It was magnificent when we were all splashing in the pool and playing together. After that we had some fish and chips we were starving. I could smell the the chips then I started eating them all. I could taste the fish and chips they were delicious. We did a humongous cannonball  because we all dived in together. then we were playing on the board the board was sinking.  water was coming on the board we were in the deep.  suddenly the board turned over then I was doggy paddling and luckily I was floating then I got carried to the shallow.  after that we had mcdonalds and kfc. the Mcdonalds was for my big brother and we ate all our kfc it was delicious. I felt amazed when we went to the kerikeri pools.